that's an old one i made it a year before but i didnot hav the chance to post it so N joy and comment
Sounds like a good mid-80's thrash song. It's definitely got potential. I liked the first set of acoustic interludes and the following riff. It might not have been necessary to repeat that set, due to the length of the song already. I really liked the key change around 100, even if it were only for a couple bars. The actual acoustic interlude later was solid, and the end solo sounded like something straight off of Ride the Lightning.

Pretty solid job, though it did seem all to familiar when listening to it. 8/10
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