#1
this is a song i wrote a long time ago but finally recorded over the past few days. i like the vibe to it, and it strays from my usual (at least content wise). its mostly inspired by a james joyce short story called "eveline," a part of the dubliners. anyway, take it for what it is and enjoy. thanks! comments and critiques always welcome and taken into consideration.

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#3
thanks for the kind words! i did try adding drums to it for about 3 minutes, but i am no drummer. i should really practice more often, but i write as little as i do now already...

anyway, thank you for the crits. i'll try out drums with a brush as soon as i can! thats actually a really good suggestion.
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