#2
The guitar was good but put a little bit more sad emotion in your voice. Think of a sad time and how it made you feel, then think of your pain and use it in your voice. You sound more happy that the girl left you lol. Not bad at all though. You sing better than me lol I'm flat like hell and girls are supposedly good at singing.

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talk to me
and i better not hear a word
do me baby
i better not feel it girl
i still got one bullet left in my nine
finna do a love crime
love crime
finna do a love crime

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#3
Guitar playing was nice and smooth. The vocals weren't bad, but there are two major flaws you have to work on. First of all, the timing was very awkward. It was sorta all over the place, you gotta sit and make sure what you're singing fits in with what's being played, otherwise it'll be very odd to listen to. Second of all, your singing is very robotic. I can detect almost no emotion whatsoever, which makes it sound very boring. You have to feel it you know, give it a little from inside you, don't just sing notes, sing a song.

Overall though it was a really good cover, you have the voice down you just have to work on some of those things I pointed out. Great job!

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