#1
ok, clearly not finished. i've just added the something somethings to show where there will be lyrics when it's finished. i'm just having a little bit of trouble writing something that im happy with. any critique on what i have finished though, would be very much appreciated.


something something
something something
i want to know
that there's something here for me

there's you
and your something else
entirely

something something
something something
help me to see
these four walls aren't all there is

there's you
and your something else
entirely
every step towards you
just sends me further back
something something

bridge (haven't decided if there will be lyrics here or not)

there's you
and your something else
entirely
every step towards you X2
just sends me further back
something something
Who decided that pie would be sold on Tuesday but not Wednesday?
#2
Im sorry dude, I'm just wondering why you would put such a rough and blunt peice up. It could work, you just need a little dose of cleverness.
Too lazy to come up with a clever or relevant sig.