#1
Hey, just finished off a couple of tracks ive been working on, so I thought it'd see what UG thinks of them!

They're called "By The Strength of Ten Thousand", and "Manufactured Hate", and they're both on my profile.

Check them out, see what you think, ill crit back of course, and any questions are welcome!

Enjoy...

~Sean.
#2
1st one: the riffs are good and solid the breakdown is good tho it goes quite for about 2 seconds.....the solo first half was good the second seemed out of key or something didn't fit with the main bulk. overall good tune keep working at it tho it has masses of promise.

2nd: i prefer this one to the other the riffs sit together better and the clean bit are great and have a good feel to em kinda like a metalliac thing going on.
nice solo real clean picked parts. the ending kinda threw me i thought my sound card died.

crit me? it's in my profile page called demo, clever eh, nah it ain't finshed waiting for some dude to do vocals.

heres a link to my albumhttps://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1178499
peace
#3
Quote by metal105
1st one: the riffs are good and solid the breakdown is good tho it goes quite for about 2 seconds.....the solo first half was good the second seemed out of key or something didn't fit with the main bulk. overall good tune keep working at it tho it has masses of promise.

2nd: i prefer this one to the other the riffs sit together better and the clean bit are great and have a good feel to em kinda like a metalliac thing going on.
nice solo real clean picked parts. the ending kinda threw me i thought my sound card died.

crit me? it's in my profile page called demo, clever eh, nah it ain't finshed waiting for some dude to do vocals.

heres a link to my albumhttps://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1178499
peace


Thanks for the crit! And aha, just before you posted this, I was already critting Massacre of Lies, so ignore the "C4C" thing I said in there cos you already have haha.
But yeah i'll go crit the demo one too.
#4
Numero uno - like metal105 said, its a solid song and like the breakdown. The solo was pretty much out of key in places so maybe going back and redoing it would sort out that.

Numero...two - I like this song alot, you've got a good vibe going on with the clean parts and again its a solid song throughout. Good playing on it two, everything seemed to meld together nicely in this one. The ending kinda threw me off and the slowing down of it isnt really that smooth.

All in all , two pretty meaty songs


if you want to crit back feel free https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1178573