#1
So, the other day I had this really bad nightmare, and when I awoke, I went straight to the computer and wrote out this song, guitar in hand.

Enjoy, and as always C4C!
Attachments:
slowsong.gp4
#2
Sounds a bit off at 'it continues', asin dissonant.

But I like the rest
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Last edited by pigeonmafia at Aug 9, 2009,
#3
Quote by pigeonmafia
Sounds a bit off at 'it continues', asin dissonant.

But I like the rest


Oh... Well... I usually try to stay away from dissonance when writing stuff, but in this case I feel it kinda fits
#4
Change the drums. There's barely any snare hits. And it's very dull with the same thing. So fix the drums.

5/10 until then.
#5
It was really boring, and the I didn't really hear any creepiness. The dissonance wasn't used very well, and t he drums were almost unchanged the whole song.

Pretty weak, 4/10.
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#7
no proper drums , no melody, no c reepyness

so 3.5/10 from me

no hard feelings just try to come up with s'th. better peace