not bad man. watch the bends. it could be the quality but there were just a few that sounded a little off. that fast lick toward the beginning is a little rough try sweeping it it might sound smoother. and the really quick hammer pull off lick at the end sounded like a few wrong notes. other than that nice playing.
That was pretty good. Maybe just practice a bit more to get it to flow a bit better. And it might just be me, but it sounded like maybe your guitar needed a slight tuning. Other than that, good playing and it sounded quite well. I also watched your YYZ rush solo cover, it was good too, good job. If anything, just keep practicing to get everything smoother.

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The bit from 0:23-0:26 could be a bit tighter but otherwise a good job. Does sound a bit out of tune but could well just be the sound quality, good job though.

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i'd say your guitar is out of tune, or you are accidentally muting strings that you aren't trying to, or your right hand isn't strumming at the same time that your left hand is fretting, or you could be reading the tab upside down...
not too bad, but you are out of tune. you've got most of it down but its the faster paced bits which let you down. the hammer on and pull off section around the 7th and 10th frets in the middle and the section at the end in particular need work. but good effort mate

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