#1
Hey guys, I just wrote(and recorded) a new song last weekend.
It's very simple but pretty melodic and a little epic.

If you post and ask me to listen to your stuff, I most likely will!

Please rate and tell me what you think about it, what could be better about it/future compositions, what I need work on, etc etc.

I am looking for criticism in every way, so I won't be butthurt about it. lol

Just so you know however, the drums are fake and I am aware that they can use a little more dynamics and fills and such. But I got really lazy by the end of recording this song. (I do everything myself essentially, except bass, just sometimes I don't feel like doing the drums.)

Anyway, hope you like it!

Link to my profile.

It's called Mimetic Angel.
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Last edited by Eunakritos at Aug 9, 2009,
#3
First and foremost, clean up the rhythm guitar and vocals, they sound a bit muddy. Otherwise, it's pretty darn good. The leads, acoustic guitar, and epic chorus were my favorite parts.

Keep it up!
#4
Quote by AA00P
First and foremost, clean up the rhythm guitar and vocals, they sound a bit muddy. Otherwise, it's pretty darn good. The leads, acoustic guitar, and epic chorus were my favorite parts.

Keep it up!



I thought the exact same thing actually.
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i want to somehow mate with this song and have babies with it
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#5
Quote by AA00P
First and foremost, clean up the rhythm guitar and vocals, they sound a bit muddy. Otherwise, it's pretty darn good. The leads, acoustic guitar, and epic chorus were my favorite parts.

Keep it up!


I think this sums it up pretty well. The acoustic guitars sounded a little out of tune, but perhaps that was intended to give it a creepy kind of feel? There's not much else I can say, it's a pretty solid track other than the production.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21126914#post21126914
#6
Quote by Clownmite
I think this sums it up pretty well. The acoustic guitars sounded a little out of tune, but perhaps that was intended to give it a creepy kind of feel? There's not much else I can say, it's a pretty solid track other than the production.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21126914#post21126914


I tuned to C Standard, so maybe the acoustic was just having a hard time staying in tune! So it would be an accident, not intentional. But oh well.

I'll take a look in a second.
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i want to somehow mate with this song and have babies with it
Well, excuuuuuuuse me princess!