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[Verse 1]
The world isn’t free, it comes with a cost
You don't meet your own expectations
You wander this world completely lost
Peering through a crack in the wall
A perfect distorted view
You will pay the cost
A voice echo's through the corridor
I hear your whispers
I hear your whispers
War!

[Chorus]
Resist the hate
Resist the hate
Resist the hate
Resist the hate
Don't walk into the dark

[Verse 2]
A devil in disguise, fake messiah
Vicious intentions concealed by propaganda
They’ll lead you like lambs to the slaughter
Protagonist of deceit
Protagonist of deceit

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How does this sound so far, and do you think it can be improved? Keep in mind it's going to be for a melodic metalcore / post-hardcore song with heavy guitar cymbal. It's also going to be yelled / screamed mainly.