#1
Hey guys whats up. I've been working on my improv guitar finally, and just kept adding to and reworking a song I recorded and I love it now. Would love to get some opinions on it.

You can listen here: http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1722157
Last edited by Ghast at Aug 11, 2009,
#2
I dont really like the synth melody and you should practice you phrasing.
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#3
i like the tune feel alot. the synth melody does have a poor tone. i think get rid of that and you would have a much better song. it makes it sound too fake. your guitar tone isn't very bluesy, and neither is this song, so i'm confused about what you mean by working on your blues? anyways, i think your phrasing could improve, your hitting a lot of dead notes.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180165
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