#1
This is basically the first full song I have ever written
Unfortunately I know a bloody **** about music and its theory, so I couldnt
get a proper solo done, so it is pretty equal to the one of a Parkway Drive Song,
which I slightly changed ( I am ashamed indeed ).

but yeah, the rest is pretty good I think, I like it.

But I still need improvement and would appreciate constructive criticism.

C4C of course if I get the links. ;D

Cheers
Last edited by -Flooow at Aug 11, 2009,
#2
uh where is it
Quote by LaGrange
Shouldnt have said the unspoken words of MG in the pit. Now look at what ya dun.


Quote by Mecler
A guitar made of wood?
That's such a ****ing brilliant idea!
#3
i'm sorry I happened to screw up the uploado f the file.
so there it is.


Edit : ah good god what have I been doing ?

theres a mistake in bar 91 or 92 in the lead-guitar :/
plz ignore this bar.
Last edited by -Flooow at Aug 11, 2009,
#4
I like it the whole thrashy verse thing was cool, the chorus was nice, the melody made me think of pirates for some reason, the clean part was nice the end melody was good and even though you admitted you modded another solo it worked, so 9/10

heres one of mine
Attachments:
New Compressed (zipped) Folder (2).zip
Quote by LaGrange
Shouldnt have said the unspoken words of MG in the pit. Now look at what ya dun.


Quote by Mecler
A guitar made of wood?
That's such a ****ing brilliant idea!
#5
Great song 9/10!!!!
There was one thing that kind of bugged me though.
The first riff for the synth needed to be a little quieter because it kinda of drowned out the rest of the tracks. Otherwise it was a great song.

Please Help me with my song!!!!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180637