#1
The newest track:
Lights in the Laurentian's Atoll.
It's originally by a band called *shels.
This is my take on it.
ambient/acoustic stuff.

The slightly older one:
In a Field of Lilies
Original
Stoner/post-rock/ambient.

C4C.

All music in profile.
Thanks
Last edited by unet at Aug 11, 2009,
#2
Lights in the Laurentian's Atoll: nice title. the intro is eerie and very cool sounding. i like the tone alot. the acoustic guitar is amazing sounding! on thing, it would be great if you could cut out the fret noises. vocals would be nice.

In a Field of Lilies: intro is way to similar to the other track. also you make your intro's too long. i like the riffs once they get started. very metal. again vocals would be really nice. you have a talent for instrumentation, but you need to work on actively capturing the listeners attention.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180165
Too cool for a signature.
#3
Quote by chrisatgrace
Lights in the Laurentian's Atoll: nice title. the intro is eerie and very cool sounding. i like the tone alot. the acoustic guitar is amazing sounding! on thing, it would be great if you could cut out the fret noises. vocals would be nice.

In a Field of Lilies: intro is way to similar to the other track. also you make your intro's too long. i like the riffs once they get started. very metal. again vocals would be really nice. you have a talent for instrumentation, but you need to work on actively capturing the listeners attention.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180165


Thank you!

For the old song, the intro was bowed with a violin bow.

They weren't meant to sound similar at all.
It just turned out that way.

I do tend to drone on a bit though, you're right.
It's more fun that way!

I'm listening to your stuff now.