#3
Great voice, awesome range. You been singing for a long time?

Guitar playing is good, too.

As for the songs, the vocal melodies are nice, some parts need work, but w/e. The second one seemed short, well it was short. But maybe it was supposed to be that kind of song.

Check mine out if you want...
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21142141#post21142141
#4
thank you.

well the short one was because my computer was running out of battery...
it is suppose to be longer though.
thank you though.

and i would check you out...but im in a boarding school and i dont have the access of adobe flash9 which is what you need...
so i cant

but thanks.
-coleman
#5
15 years later: i like the vocals. you sound very mature for your age. the guitar could use some work. the recording sounds kinda flat to me. work on eq and maybe a bit of reverb. good voice though.

hero: guitar is again kinda predictable. vocals are again very nice! good job. i think with some work you'll be really great. your sense of melody is really good, you just need some work on the instrumentation side of things.


crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180165
Too cool for a signature.