#2
Very catchy, with some well thought-out lyrics. Your vocals are great, and it's harmonized in all the right places. I've listened to quite a few acoustic/vocal songs today, and your guitar playing doesn't stand out that much, but the tone of your guitar is very nice.
#3
this is pretty cool. the guitar is fairly chill, although i got a bit tired of it. the tone is nice. i thought the lyrics were good, but i wasn't crazy about the vocals. they seemed a bit bored and unemotional. i thought more instrumentation would really make the song.
Too cool for a signature.
#4
Thanks for the crit.

hopefully im getting used to critting acoustic/vocal songs now seeing as I've been presented with a few over the past few days :P

It's a very nice chilled out song, the usual stuff that graces my ears on a nice warm summer day with a few beers and friends. Guitar tone was great but a bit more clarity would be awesome. Lyrics are great and your voice is brilliant.

Great stuff
#5
I loved your voice, great chill song, awesome lyrics, and I loved the harmonized parts.
The guitar parts may be simple and repetitive but they fit the song perfectly.

9.5/10, great job, -.5 because you could have added some other instrument or a backing track, but it still sounds good.
#6
i liked the guitar playing and the vocals were good, but i feel that the doubling of the vocals aren't necessary. that's just my opinion and it's down to w/e you like.
#7
hey man, your voice is pretty good! Good harmonys at some points. What did you use to record?

The guitar sounds nice. Generally a nice wee acoustic song. Tho I think it would sound banging with a full band with you. And maybe some instrumentation as someone else said.

But well done anyway. Not really my kind of thing but its nice to listen to.