#1
hey, i wrote this song a while ago and the music is done for it but seeing as i just got a UG profile i figured i would throw em up and see what people think, in the song the verses are screamed and the chorus is a clean vocal, and seeing as its more of a metalcore thrash metal song theres a solo in there, hehe... but thats the info for this piece.

ive seen you,
in the darkness of my dreams,
constantly,
telling me,
this is not what your to be.
and then i wake up,
sirens nearing,
youve saved this sould again.
who are you?
why do you watch me,
what have i done to gain this friend?

theres something wrong with me i cant describe.
a blessed sould you've picked to suffer by,
you've seen the horrid things these hands can do,
why cant the man beind these hands see you.

you had to see it,
the last soul that i claimed,
you saw him beg,
for mercy,
saw him slain,
you saw me laughing,
as he took his last breath,
you saw a murderer,
but you wont look away.

theres something wrong with me i cant describe.
a blessed sould you've picked to suffer by,
you've seen the horrid things these hands can do,
why cant the man beind these hands see you.

i cant believe this,
that your still watching me,
keeping the tiger,
protected from his feast.
watching in nightfall,
to rouse the citys gaurds
keeping the poacher,
one step ahead of the beast.

theres something wrong with me i cant describe.
a blessed sould you've picked to suffer by,
you've seen the horrid things these hands can do,
why cant the man beind these hands see you.
#2
a first look at the intro and i thought you were makin this a typical emo **** song, but the last verse is pretty nice, the only hard part being to figure out the guitar pieces for them....
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#3
yeah, thats what alot of people have told me, but i had actually written complete instrumentation first then sat down to write this part. i was going to post this songs gp5 file up in one of the other forum sections but it was to big to upload or something like that.