#1
I've never posted any lyrics on here before, so I've finally decided to..
Both music and lyrics written by me.. Though the music isn't exactly here... Just throwing that fact out there though! Supposed to be a blackened death metal piece. Song by: Animula (my band: www.myspace.com/excessum696) This song hasn't been recorded yet but will be soon. Anyways.. Enjoy!


Verse 1 -
The wings crack, the angels fall
Watch the holy bloodshed flow
The choir chants from Hell
"Bleed your souls unto us all!"
Fires bursting from the ground
Lightning cracking through the sky
Tonight Hell's will be done
Tonight the war will come

Chorus -
Armageddon is here
In this black dimension of fear
Armageddon is here
End of all life is near

Verse 2 -
Beating at the gates of Heaven
Demons storm like mindless so(u)ldiers
Wildfires scorch the distance
Enveloped in a veil of death
Humanity is sentenced
To fight for all existence
Yet, time will soon run out
Mankind, to rot in rapture

Chorus -
Armageddon is here
In this black dimension of fear
Armageddon is here
End of all life is near

Verse 3 -
Watch the world be brought to nothing
Watch the universe fail
See the Sun explode
See Heaven's gates corrode
The demons fall into their graves
Everyone gets what they want
Peace on Earth at last
But everyone is dead
"We programmed in death...A thousand needles lie here to inject their lies."
Last edited by Killswitch666 at Aug 12, 2009,
#2
I liked it, very powerful lyrics in my opinion
"Most people are trying to simplify the world. We're definitely here to complicate it." - Dad
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I you for posting this.

<-- Pretty much sums me up

8/7/09


^ I was there
#3
this is great. before i had changed the chorus on mine, it was nearly identical to these, at least in the way it's arranged.

great minds think alike, i do suppose

i do have one suggestion though, try changing

"Watch the world be brought to nothing
Watch the universe fail
See the Sun explode
See Heaven's gates corrode"

to

"Watch the world be brought to nothing
See the Sun explode
Watch the universe fail
See Heaven's gates corrode"

i just personally think it would flow better that way, but that's me, it is your piece, after all, and an incredible one at that.
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#4
Hmmm.. Ya know now that I think about it, it makes more sense that way.. It kinda makes things happen in order hahah! Thanks for the awesome comments man!
"We programmed in death...A thousand needles lie here to inject their lies."
#5
I like it
The chorus sounds a bit cliche to me, but the rest of the song is awesome

nice job!