#3
nice man! good little tune. i liked the chords. with you only being 15 i was wondering what the vocals would sound like. and i was serprised they were realy good. i like when you sing the high notes in certain parts. it sounds real good. i also liked the lyrics about looking outside and seing a cloud about to rain and whatnot. it did get a little but long, and i think if you added another segment or chorus that would help. or else maybe shortin it a little bit. good stuff though. nice coffee house music. do you consider youreself folk?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21185847#post21185847