#2
Good song, I like it. Did you record it using just a single mic? The guitar sound is really "old-timey", almost like an old steel-string that's never gotten new strings.

I think this is a song that could benefit a lot from a nice arrangement with some subdued drum work and the odd piano part. It also definitely needs some harmonies for the chorus instead of just doubling. Are you planning on re-recording it later with a full band treatment?
#3
first thanks for the crit.
it sound pretty good. it needs maybe another guitar and maybe soft drums. your singing sounds a little wierd but not bad . your guitar playing is clean and interesting. you also have nice lyrics. overall a nice song keep up the good work.
#4
Thanks for the crit mate!

This piece is great in its simplicity. You could add another guitar track but I mean theres a certain integrity to it with its 'one bloke, a guitar and a message to tell' vibe. I like that vibe.
The double tracked vocals add some warmth to it and the whole thing is a really soothing sort of ditty. Very relaxing.

Solid effort mate.
"I feel sorry for James Blunt, he has to wake up every morning and think 'Ah man, I'm James Blunt'"
#5
thanks for the crit! I like this song alot! Could i say try and put some things behind it, drums, bass, maybe a bit of a synth line, it's a great song but you could take it soo much further
#6
yea really weird guitar tone, it almost sounds ukulele-ish. i liked it though very relaxing. vocals kind remind me of Elliott Smith crossed with Earl Grant. pretty chill though. a little simple but it works, it would be nice to get some more instruments in there. crit songs on my profile?
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