So I'm still pretty new to writing, and I'm trying to write lots of different stuff not just metal. I like metal, I just want to broaden my horizon's.

And this is my first time subjecting my work to the viciousness of an internet forum lmao so here goes.

Any tips at all would be great, slander will be ignored.
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