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#1
Yep its that time again. I'm off in my writings and I need the pit for inspiration again.

Don't ask what my story is about because I won't tell you.

Ok, basically my main character is in Miami and has to walk all the way to New York, yes walk.

At some point, in another city along the way, between Miami and New York, he is to encounter opposition from a rival character.

Which city shall this conflict take place in.

I would prefer that this city to be closer to New York if you can. Basically he is traveling in a straight line from Miami to New York.

Thanks pit

OK GO

edit:
I need that state that city is in also

yes this is in the US
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#3
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fried oreos ... somehow work that into the story line


I'll work on that, but in the meantime give me a city
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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#6
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It will take place in the Orlando Gym. His rival will be the Professor's grandson. Both of them are tying to have a battle with the Orlando Gym Leader.


umm........ no

metaldud, I worship you to death, but I can't use this
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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#7
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It will take place in the Orlando Gym. His rival will be the Professor's grandson. Both of them are tying to have a battle with the Orlando Gym Leader.

+1 Have him stop somewhere in Maryland
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#10
Philadelphia, damnit.
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#11
You HAVE to turn it into a pokemon story line.
^ was said while intoxicated, so don't hold it against me.

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#12
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Why the f*ck not ?!!? It's the perfect conflict for a crime scene!


Two things
1.) no one is going to die yet
2.) no pokemon are involved in this story

edit:
*reads above post

I'm 18, I outgrew pokemon years ago.
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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#13
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the conflict takes place in toronto, the conflict- he walked past new york

u've thought that one through
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#15
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Two things
1.) no one is going to die yet

Fine.
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2.) no pokemon are involved in this story

Ok this story is suddenly no longer interesting. GOODDAY Sir.
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I'm 18, I outgrew pokemon years ago.

I'm almost 20. I still make Pokemon references.
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#16
have zombies in texas
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So pardon me while I burn and rise above the flame.
#17
I think he should have an accidental detour to like Albany. That would definitely piss me off if that happened.


EDIT: I'm 17 and my girlfriend and I play Pokemon all the time! We have the Orange Islands DvD and gameboy emulators for our computers.
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#18
D.C.? an epic conflict on the capital
So that with good courage we say, “The Lord is my helper. I will not fear. What can man do to me?”

-Hebrews 13:6
#19
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Two things
1.) no one is going to die yet
2.) no pokemon are involved in this story

edit:
*reads above post

I'm 18, I outgrew pokemon years ago.

Don't lie you still play.
^ was said while intoxicated, so don't hold it against me.

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#20
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It will take place in the Orlando Gym. His rival will be the Professor's grandson. Both of them are tying to have a battle with the Orlando Gym Leader.

Dude, thats exactly what I was thinking after I read TS's post!
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#22
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I'm almost 20. I still make Pokemon references.




Wow, just wow.
I don't know what to say
I still love you though

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D.C.? an epic conflict on the capital


This would work is DC was still standing. but yeah I'll take this into consideration
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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#23
nothing can beat texan zombies
Pardon me while I burst into flames.
I've had enough of the world and its people's mindless games.
So pardon me while I burn and rise above the flame.
#24
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nothing can beat texan zombies

Delawarian Zombies are much better
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Why would you spend tens of thousands of dollars to learn about a language you already speak? It was over before it even started dude

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brot pls
#25
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Delawarian Zombies are much better

what are they?
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#26
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nothing can beat texan zombies


he is walking from Miami straight to New York. Why would he stop in Texas?
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

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Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#27
Easy, have him run in to some hicks in the VA area that are out to kill the character because he voted Democrat.
#28
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Easy, have him run in to some hicks in the VA area that are out to kill the character because he voted Democrat.


I am democrat you realize that don't you
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

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Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#29
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he is walking from Miami straight to New York. Why would he stop in Texas?

because he got kidnapped and taken to good old texas. where the leader of the zombies is none other then George. W. Bush
Pardon me while I burst into flames.
I've had enough of the world and its people's mindless games.
So pardon me while I burn and rise above the flame.
#30
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I am democrat you realize that don't you


And I'm a Libertarian. Hicks are out to kill us both.
#32
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You could say "one day you will be the coolest dad and/or uncle ever" ?


One day you'll be the coolest uncle ever.
#34
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You could say "one day you will be the coolest dad and/or uncle ever" ?


I swear to god if I find out that you are the real father of my kids





you will be the coolest dad ever

but seriously
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

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Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#35
Washington D.C.

He foolishly chose a fire type when his rival took the water. tsk tsk
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#36
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Washington D.C.

He foolishly chose a fire type when his rival took the water. tsk tsk


FOR THE LAST TIME THERE ARE NO POKEMON IN THIS STORY!!!!
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

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Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#37
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FOR THE LAST TIME THERE ARE NO POKEMON IN THIS STORY!!!!


well that's your problem right there

how do you expect to write prize-winning, bestselling literature without including pokemon?
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#38
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well that's your problem right there

how do you expect to write prize-winning, bestselling literature without including pokemon?


because my story is awesome, even without pokemon
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

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Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#39
He gets lost in Camden, NJ (was like the 3rd most dangerous city in the US). Gets tangled up in shenanigans with gangs/ghetto people?

Just an idea
#40
Have the planters peanut be used somewhere.
But seriously, have it in Philly.
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