#2
I am writing my cirt now. While im doing it chek mine :]

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1181112

Ok crit as i listen

i didnt really like the intro
just not my thing

It needs a lead of some sort if you ask me.
I like bars 21 - 28 its a good progression and stuff just seems so empty =/
Work on it more then let me know i'll crit it again
Last edited by mtgold83 at Aug 15, 2009,
#3
Quote by mtgold83
I am writing my cirt now. While im doing it chek mine :]

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1181112

Ok crit as i listen

1. i didnt really like the intro
just not my thing

2. It needs a lead of some sort if you ask me.
3. I like bars 21 - 28 its a good progression and stuff just seems so empty =/
4. Work on it more then let me know i'll crit it again

1. Alright.

2. I'll get my friend to come over and help me out with lead stuff, I'm a rhythm guitarist and bassist and know nothing of leads. Track 3 was supposed to be the lead guitar track.

3. Should I put the acoustic on for those tracks as well? I found it sort of filled out the sound (I'm using the Ovation Acoustic in the soundbank which has a lot of reverb in it), but I wanted to take it out for where the vocals come in to give the vocals some time to stand out (which I obviously can't do on Guitar Pro).

4. Will do.
#4
if ur using RSE im not lol.
i use midi always
XD.
Rse is a broken feature.
umm i think it just sounds empty bc of it being leadless. And if your a rhythm guitarist i understnad now that makes sense that you'd be wriitng without leads. You'll get to the point where leads bcome very easy
#5
Quote by mtgold83
if ur using RSE im not lol.
i use midi always
XD.
Rse is a broken feature.
umm i think it just sounds empty bc of it being leadless. And if your a rhythm guitarist i understnad now that makes sense that you'd be wriitng without leads. You'll get to the point where leads bcome very easy

Ah, that explains it. I just listened without RSE and it was pretty crappy without it. I'll have to make a recording of it when my friend (same guy who does lead) brings his acoustic over, it sounds and plays amazing). Yeah, I don't know any lead work besides the blues scale and that wouldn't really fit here. So when I get him over, the song will be revamped.