#1
Feeling sick and uninspired
inside my head there is a button
which I can push when nobody's watching
but the chance doesn't come along too often

Study drawings of the spire
I twist in my frailty and find an excuse
To do what I will and indulge in what I must
In what I simply must, to the point of abuse

I feel obtuse
Devoid of meaning
In my 'flawed' thinking
Towards suicide I lean...

Kill,
Do we know when we kill,
and Love,
Do we know what is Love?
Even still
I kill...for love

Growing toenails past the threshold
Of human tolerance at it's mean, masturbatory mode
At your center, there's a button
When it's pushed it triggers control

Do you look to be consoled?
In your eyes there is a violence
That we necessarily have to know
That we must love if we wish to love anything then

I probe within
I'm devoid of meaning
In my 'flawed' thinking
Towards suicide I spin...

Kill,
Do we know when we kill,
and Love,
Do we know what is Love?
Even still
I kill...for love

KILL, WHAT YOU WILL
WILL, ME TO DEATH
SPILL AN INKWELL OF PURE EMOTION
OR, IF YOU WILL, DO LESS

Kill,
Do we know when we kill,
and Love,
Do we know what is Love?
Even still
I kill...for love
#2
Feeling sick and uninspired

A very powerful line, indeed.
You carried that emotion throughout the entire piece.
Well done.
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#4
First I hated the toenail bit, now I love it because it's disgusting and hits the right spot. I'm a little confused as to where this is coming from BUT anyway, nice and gritty and I like it though I geneally don't dig the whole 'KILL KILL KILL' theme.
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#5
This feels like it's something very personal, great lyrics, great way of wording your thoughts!
Everything holds together well, and I can't really see any flaws in it... Is there any music for it, or is it just a text?
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Last edited by poipoi at Aug 16, 2009,