#1
Uploaded a new song to myspace. I'm on lead vocals and guitar, my friend is playing drums, bass and contributing backing vocals.

C4C

Thanks,
Last edited by Telecaster_AGY at Jun 23, 2016,
#2
Wow! Not the sort of thing I see on here very often, and I'm blown away! No offence, but when the clean chords started I was like "oh no a boring pop song..." and then bam! the band came in and the singing started and I was like "very nice". It's catchy, all the instruments are well played and sound lush, the singing is very good, especially the harmony parts. It sounds very professional overall. The only thing I can think of to improve would be the solo - it doesn't quite 'flow' for me...it's technically good and there's nothing 'wrong' with it as such, but I guess it just sound to me like it's not quite right for the song.

Also, I really like your acoustic song + added you as a friend.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1183409
#3
I like it a lot, but I am going to have to agree with dethofmoo that the solo doesn't quite fit with Nothing Matters Now. Other than that, I really like it.
#4
acoustic tone is a little too midsy. i'd like it to be deeper sounding. the drums are nice sounding! i like the vocals quite alot. i thought you could be a bit clearer sounding for this type of music. i couldn't really get the lyrics. the chorus i think was too close to the sound of the verse. maybe spice things up with a more uplifting chord progression? i like the electric guitar sound that comes in. backing vocals were nice. solo could be better. first off, the tone was kinda nasty. the bass in that part sounds cool. i like the pop.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1180165
Too cool for a signature.
#5
very cetchy and pro sounding. nice groove/strumming pattern. the vocals are good. they sound real and not fake like allot of these type songs. nice job man. the intro chords before the band came in sounded a little too long. maybe just a messure or 2. it started to drag on, and then boom the band came in. lyrics were cool. overall a nice track. i bet this would be good live. the harmony at 222 reminds me of the beatles. good stuff. i thought the solo sounded perfect for this song. nice emotion in it. tone was great. nice song man. this is the best thing i've heard all day.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1183852
#7
I like "whatever comes to you" nice intro great vocals and awesome solos just an all around great song.