#1
(This is the first piece I've ever written. I know I'll get better as I keep writing more, but yeah, it may be pretty cliche and sound pretty bland, but I wrote this in 15 minutes at 2 in the morning.)

Today was the day
I welcomed you back
into our cycle
Instead, you shut me
down

How's that for a change?
You call me with a voice that I've
never heard before.
You hand me over that one-liner
It has done no good for me

Always remember
This soul hasn't given up
on you just yet
And never forget
that you will forever be
my favorite 3-lettered
lover.

I'm pleading for help
with myself on the floor.
This song won't change anything
But you're the one I adore

Always remember
This soul hasn't given up
on you just yet
And never forget
that you will forever be
my favorite 3-lettered
lover.

(Be nice. ... )
GO GO GO!
#2
not bad my friend. needs to be longer I think but defiantly got something going on there.
A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence.