#1
her names megan
i have 2 sing about her
our stories begun
i get to see her in half an hour
i just cant wait
my leg starts to shake


i love u more than any baby
ill be there forever baby
just sit here forever baby with me
with me

irst we met we didnt talk 2 eachother
we just went around with 1 another
until we spoke
then i awoke

i love u more than any baby
ill be there forever baby
just sit here forever baby with me
with me


ok its not done but tell me if its good so far improvement etc and leave a link for me to critque
#2
Just so you can attempt to change the title (i will actually crit in just a bit) the rules say u cant have C4C in the title, only the body of the song. HURRY AND CHANGE IT!!!
Too lazy to come up with a clever or relevant sig.
#3
Like the guy above said you have to remove the C4C from your title or the thread will be closed, but as a head's up this song sounds pretty much like Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus, you might want to do something about that, some of the lyrics and stuff are almost like for like, plus it fits perfectly to the tune of the song.