just posted new "demo" of a gothic movie themeish thingy...

looking for opinions of the power chord part around 2:15 if that is too rocky for this little work in progress...

was goin for "serial killer comin after your ass" ..... the marching

cut my index finger on a chipped fret btw


what you think

gothish or rockish....

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I read it as "Gothfish or Rockfish"

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To me this didn't sound gothish at all, sorry. However, it did remind me a little of the track "East Hastings" by Godspeed You Black Emperor. Which, coincidentally is featured in 28 days later so maybe you're onto something here.
I think the 2:15 part will work well provided that you build up to it with a big crescendo godspeed style, as at the moment it just sounds like a few ideas slapped together. In conclusion I reckon it's definately got potential, it just needs stringing together (which is sometimes the hardest part about writing music). Also, this gives me more of a post-apocalyptic vibe than a slasher type motif.

Hope this helps =)
ya i did do this yesterday for the other song rockgamer :P

it is a a few ideas slapped together

i'll check out what you said see if i can get anything from it thank ya d3
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