It sounds like you might have the right idea....

but unfortunately it sounds like you recorded it with a cell phone.

so it's a little hard to really give you a good critique.

but if you could manage to get a better recording then I bet people could give you good advice to realy fine tune your playing.
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NaivexLi is anything but naive. His post was a pretty good source of info.


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Thanks im bout to actually work on it right now, something went wrong with one of the effects.