#2
Sounds nice man. I really like the feel of the song.
The beginning of the song sounds a tiny bit funny, just the way it starts off. Maybe if you started the song off on count 4 with just a beat on the snare drum, and then have the rest of the tracks come in, that would make the start of the song a lot smoother, in my opinion.
As far as the mix goes, I'd recommend turning up the bass just a tad, and also making it a bit more bassier, if you can.
The guitar parts were excellent, but i wish i could have heard more of that amazing tapping/shredding/i'm not exactly sure what to call it part at the end there.
The ending was abrupt, but I suppose it is just a sample. I'd really like to hear the final version of this song. Nice work!

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If man is 5, if man is 5, if man is 5,
then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, the Devil is 6,
And if the Devil is 6,

then God is 7, then God is 7, then God is 7
This monkey's gone to heaven.
#3
Nice mixing and recording. It's very relaxing and groovy. The playing is tight. This song would sound great as 'background' kind of music, but it could perhaps use more variation in the drums and bass to make it sound more interesting, especially if you want to make it a longer song.

Create an actual ending for the song and it'll be pretty good! Keep it up.