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i listend to into the desset. kind of reminded me of david bowie. space odycy. nice playing. i liked the chords. i was hoping for lyrics and never got them. i think with some lyrics about time travel or something this would be ace. it sounded like an old peace of acoustic from the 60s. i like the homeade simple acoustic style. i think you should add another section to it. or a key change to shake things up/make it longer. otherwise well done.

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#3
Quote by chasepalmer
i listend to into the desset. kind of reminded me of david bowie. space odycy. nice playing. i liked the chords. i was hoping for lyrics and never got them. i think with some lyrics about time travel or something this would be ace. it sounded like an old peace of acoustic from the 60s. i like the homeade simple acoustic style. i think you should add another section to it. or a key change to shake things up/make it longer. otherwise well done.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21264912#post21264912


lyrics aren't my thing. My lyrics are always boring, don't flow, and as far as expressing yourself, i find that it is too easy to express emotion with lyrics (eg. I miss my baby ohhhhh yahhhh). much harder to say that with a guitar. already critted yours by the way.