song i wrote monday night. put genre as extreme metal just cause I'm not sure what exact subgenre this would fit in...
Free your mind and your ass will follow
The kingdom of heaven is within
Open up your funky mind and you can fly

I don't know why noone crit'd this yet.

I would most likely go with Technical Death Metal here, though the few riffs at the beginning do sound a lot like the good ol' black metal. Anyway, nice little intro. Sounds evil and like the old-school black metal. The riff that starts at 9 starts off strong, but when I listened to bar 11, I had a "wtf?" moment. I don't think it fits at all. If I hear this with drums, I might understand it, but for now it really bites me. 21-26 is a decent riff, but repeats for way too long. The x4 could easily be an x2 and sound great. The solo at 50 is short and sweet, just the way I like it. The riff at 56 again repeats for way too long. 61 is perfect, leave it. And then the song ends with a familiar riff. Not bad, I suggest toning down the repeats and make the riffs flow a little better. It sounds so ****ing random at some points, even for Tech Death. Good Luck!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1185868
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Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne

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