#1
song i wrote monday night. put genre as extreme metal just cause I'm not sure what exact subgenre this would fit in...
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8-17-09.gp5
Free your mind and your ass will follow
The kingdom of heaven is within
Open up your funky mind and you can fly

Sumdeus
#2
I don't know why noone crit'd this yet.


I would most likely go with Technical Death Metal here, though the few riffs at the beginning do sound a lot like the good ol' black metal. Anyway, nice little intro. Sounds evil and like the old-school black metal. The riff that starts at 9 starts off strong, but when I listened to bar 11, I had a "wtf?" moment. I don't think it fits at all. If I hear this with drums, I might understand it, but for now it really bites me. 21-26 is a decent riff, but repeats for way too long. The x4 could easily be an x2 and sound great. The solo at 50 is short and sweet, just the way I like it. The riff at 56 again repeats for way too long. 61 is perfect, leave it. And then the song ends with a familiar riff. Not bad, I suggest toning down the repeats and make the riffs flow a little better. It sounds so ****ing random at some points, even for Tech Death. Good Luck!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1185868
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