#1
This one was set out to be a completed song.. but I started it today and I finished it today.. everything created from scratch.. it's for all intent a Jam.. the instruments I played real time with no edits so here it is warts and all..

I'll clean it up later on.. right now I kind of like it's really rude and crude delivery..

The words are on the page if one is interested.. as there is no way in heck you'll be able to get them by listening to this song as it is..


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=676362&songID=7995585
#3
Quote by newaccount
I really liked it!


Wow..

Hey thanks.. nice to hear..

It got me kicked off another forum.. *L*

I guess if I would of written about degrading dames, easy money and popping a cap in someones @#^$# it would of been totally accepted and fine and dandy.. but as this was mild social commentary, I guess it was too much for em.. go figure..

thats why I like THIS place..

Thanks again..

Peace~!
#4
On the off chance someone was paying any attention, i did just update the song.. I pulled some of the pickup hum from the Strats Track.. sounds a bit less aggressive noise wise..
#5
very unique feel i dont even know how to categorize this? some kind of a funky/ambient rock maybe? very interesting thats for sure. it kinda seems a little over crowded though and maybe a bit more of a melody would be good but im just nit picking (butchered that spelling?)
overall very well done though.

Crit my band? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1186499
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#6
Quote by MattsRichardson
very unique feel i dont even know how to categorize this? some kind of a funky/ambient rock maybe? very interesting thats for sure. it kinda seems a little over crowded though and maybe a bit more of a melody would be good but im just nit picking (butchered that spelling?)
overall very well done though.

Crit my band? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1186499



ACK.. I tried to get to your music but it said I needed to upload a new version of Flash..

As I am on someone elses computer I am not going to do that.. but when I get home to my own machine this evening I will give you an ear and some thoughts..
#8
Really funky effects you have in there

Guitar reminds me of Joe Satriani

And has anybody said that your voice sounds like Dave Mustaine?


Overall, very original song
Last edited by The Shroom420 at Aug 22, 2009,