#2
Sounds ok, it would be better if you would play a harmonic line over it.

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#3
Awesome riff man it would sound cool with a harmonizer on the break down just for a eerier feel lol, and thanks for the crit.
#4
Quote by ItWillDo
Sounds ok, it would be better if you would play a harmonic line over it.



Thanks! I am actually in the process of adding a harmony as we speak! : )
#5
Quote by TheFireWithinPA
Thanks! I am actually in the process of adding a harmony as we speak! : )

Ah great, let me know when you have the final result ^^.

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