Sounds pretty good man, the only thing is at the end of a lot of the lines you do the same thing James Hetfield does and add in a "uh". Not dissing by any means sounds good.
I agree with the previous critique. Your singing is a little weak, especially the end of the phrases. Adding that "uh" sound is alright every now and then, but I feel it was overused quite a bit in this. The guitar playing is very nice and pleasant. Good cover overall though.

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