#1
I Walk
Away
But you eyes pull me right back
One month
Ten days
Its getting so i can't keep track

Im So Addicted
ADDICTED

To you
My dear
I'm withdrawing as i speak
It's true
I fear
I'll die 'cause you make me so...weak

ADDICTED
ADDICTED
ADDICTED
ADDICTED

You're like my heroin
You're like my crystal meth
You're my Amphetamine
You're like my cigarette

Im...
So...
ADDICTED

I CLOSE MY EYES
I SEE YOUR FACE
OUR BODIES INTERTWINED
AS WE REST IN PEACE

Oh when I close my eyes
I only see your face
Our souls will intertwine
Until we rest in peace

YOURE LIKE MY HEROIN
YOURE LIKE MY CRYSTAL METH
YOURE LIKE MY AMPHETAMINE
YOURE LIKE MY CIGARETTE
YOURE LIKE MY HEROIN
YOURE LIKE MY CRYSTAL METH
YOURE LIKE MY AMPHETAMINE
YOURE LIKE MY CIGARETTE
#2
I like the way you compare women and drugs. It's a great concept in my opinion, probably because I feel the same way sometimes.

The first little section is probably my favorite because it flows really well. It's got this whole start/stop kinda thing going on.

I tried carrying that same rhythm over to the second little bit that you had structured the same way, and it flowed well up until "I'll die 'cause you make me so...weak". I know what you're trying to say, but you gotta find another way to word it, otherwise it doesn't flow right. Too many syllables. You might have to change the other line in that stanza as well, maybe find a new rhyme. But I don't know, I'm probably hearing the song differently from you.

Also, I think it would be more correct for you to say "of you" rather than "to you" on the second verse.

The rest of the song was alright until it got really repetitive. And that happened quickly. I can't see a song being made out of this unless it's really short. I think you gotta expand on it a little, maybe dig deeper a little bit into the issue, and then you might have a good song on your hands.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21294816