#1
So I added vocals to 'Alt-Metal song 2" It's called How Long in my profile, Sorry my voice is not the best (pretty bad) but I think I'm better at screaming than singing, also my mic is pretty bad,

Also, The verse is more spoken than sung.

Thanks for any advise!

C4C


The Lyrics:

How Long?


I, I strike you down,
force you out, I spit on your face
curse you name, The blood is on my hands
as I hold the lash that cuts you, by my arm
your blood is spilled,

Chorus:
Oh! How long will this go on!
the blood runs down you face!
You've fallen in disgrace!
by my own hand!

You, you look into my eyes
and all I see is love, all I see
is peace, my hand strikes your face,
but you. you never blame!

Repeat chorus:

Bridge:

Oh! how long?

Repeat Chorus:
#2
The recording quality is too bad for me to be able to say anything about the music, but I can say that you need more emotion when singing. Your voice may be bad, but it's much more obvious if you don't even sound like you're trying.
#3
A lot of the problem is that the mic is soooo crappy that whe nyou sing too loud it buzz like heck, I want to get a vocal mic soon though,
#4
Something you could try when recording vocals is to be further away from the mic. It sounds like it's in your throat or something.
#7
Yeah it's actually the mic we use for skype, good for that not so much for singing, also I recorded the screams on my camera and they came out clearer.