#1
Why do you have to leave
while I’m sitting here grieving?
Is it possible, for you not to be
so beautiful and so amazing?
I know you’re the star I need
a star that just can’t shine for me
I see you glow
and whenever I do, it is all I see.

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.

As I watch a bird,
fly right through the sky.
I think of you and see,
a flower bloom right before my eyes.
I know that I’ll never feel the
same way as I do now.
I know you’re the one I need.
We belong together.

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.

All the love that’s been lost.
All the pain that isn’t worth the cost.
Changed the way I see. The way I feel. The way I’ll be.
Where are you now?
Where are you now?
Where are you now?

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.


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#3
Another great song. I agree with the other poster, I really like 'watching the glass break' and 'hoping what broke wasn't everything'.

But with the bridge (or third verse, I don't know) I'm not so sure about the repeating of Where are you now? You know, after all of the deepness within the other lines I don't think that 'Where are you now' really fits in.
And another line that didn't fit to me was 'all the pain that isn't worth the cost'. I like the idea/meaning but I don't like the way you put it out there.

Anyway, great job.
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#4
Quote by ChaozXxX
Why do you have to leave
while I’m sitting here grieving?
Is it possible, for you not to be
so beautiful and so amazing?
I don't like this at all.
I know you’re the star I need
a star that just can’t shine for me
I see you glow
and whenever I do, it is all I see.

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
Seems forced.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.
I like this last part.

As I watch a bird,
fly right through the sky.
Tired cliche.
I think of you and see,
a flower bloom right before my eyes.
I know that I’ll never feel the
same way as I do now.
I know you’re the one I need.
We belong together.

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.

All the love that’s been lost.
All the pain that isn’t worth the cost.
Very good rhyme here.
Changed the way I see. The way I feel. The way I’ll be.
Huh?
Where are you now?
Where are you now?
Where are you now?

I don’t understand why it has to be this way.
Without you, I just can’t see the day.
I sit here, watching the glass break.
Hoping what broke wasn’t everything.


If you want C4C, leave link.


This is okay for me.... But I just don't like most love songs I come across. The glass breaking was a good metaphor, and should have been used more, IMHO. It has potential.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1191690