Okay this song is still in the works but I just wanted to know what anyone thought about it I'm 16 and have written quite a few song okay let me know what you think, thanks!!

Have you ever felt like jumping head first into something you dont know if you'll live through so should I take this knife and cut this rope and swim down into this mote or burn the rope and watch it die and spread my wings and fly

Oh how you saved me you'll never know oh the deeper I fall the deeper I want to go oh this white sunday I never want to wake up