#1
You’ll be the next to die

World of darkness
Kill to survive
The dark at dawn
Nobody is safe

World of darkness
The machine will attack
Get ready to fight
Get ready to die

Humans killing humans
This sh*t will never end
We must do something
To stop this f*cking world

You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next to suffer
You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next victim

Killing for pleasure
This world is gone insane
Destructing for money
Causing so much pain

Where is our savior now?
Where is our god?
Where is our peace?
Where is our pride?

You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next to suffer
You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next victim

[solo]

You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next to suffer
You’ll be the next to die
You’ll be the next victim

Prepare yourself to die
This is a endless mistake
All buried deep under
This will be our fate

Prepare yourself to die


So this is lyrics to a song me and my friend wrote. It's not finished yet but this are the final lyrics, I guess... Well feel free to comment and leave recomendations
After all you fell in love with death,
Life has aborted.
All you've had and all you became,
The night is calling, you pray forth.





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#2
Lacks originality but will make a good song provided that it has good instrumentals... get rid of the "we must do something, to stop this ****ing world"... Too many songs with that same line... or similar for that matter
#3
Well it's our first attemp at writting a song but we will try to getting it to te the next level... as far as instrumental it's kinda technical and fast in drop D, lamb of god style
After all you fell in love with death,
Life has aborted.
All you've had and all you became,
The night is calling, you pray forth.





Are You a PROG-HEAD? I am.
#4
I think it would sound good doom style and with tremolo picking, plus really heavy drums should accompany this.