C4C. This is kind of a Blink-182ish song. There isn't a way to explain the melody and rhythm I have in mind for the vocals, but I figured it would be nice to get feedback on the words themselves. I only have the first verse done right now, but I'll still do C4C.

[Verse 1]
I know.
I know you feel like ****, yeah
I know.
I know you think that it's, not worth it.

Nothing's perfect.
But it looks pretty ****ing close, from down here.
Yeah it's clear;
you don't really care, what I know.