#1
Hey this is the first time im posting one of my songs soo be nice...

Its soft and heavy and probaly too straight forward at times...
but i hope you guys and gals enjoy it

Edit 1: Ive finished it , changed bar 20 (Lead), added bars 126 - 188

Anything you think i should changed just tell me...
Attachments:
orch-rock edit 1.zip
I broke a G string when I fingered A minor
Last edited by maddog26 at Aug 26, 2009,
#2
Wow. That was amazing. I really enjoyed it. The heavy parts reminded me of Dimmu Borgir, and the piano/cello part was amazing. The only flaw was the ending, but you said it isn't finished so I'm sure you'll come up with something.

If you wouldn't mind looking at my song Shades of Rain that would be great.
The style is a little different but I need some feedback.
link: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1189381
Thanks!
#3
Good Job dude. Just check those arpeggios at bar 20, some of the notes dont quite fit.
Other than that Great song. Very unique style. I aslo think some piano during the heavier parts might work well but thats up to you. Kinda like whatcha got goin in the outro.

If you woudnt mind looking at my song that would be great
link: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1189517
thanks