#1
Hey people!

To hear the song go to my profile, its the only song on there so far, so not hard to miss!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/-Ravenous-/

Let me know what you guys think!

Or if you want to know anything about my gear or how I record, my settings or any of that, just ask! I wont bite
My Gear

Guitars:
Dean Cadillac

Amp:
Marshall JVM 205H
2x12 Harley Benton Cab w/V30's
#2
Very nice recording! Home recording or studio?

Intro is a bit too long...

No lyric?

I really like your clean interlude sound really melodic!

Nice sweeping solo, a bit short but sound very cool!

Your drum also sound good and i like your tone of guitar...
#3
Quote by MangeuDePoutine
Very nice recording! Home recording or studio?

Intro is a bit too long...

No lyric?

I really like your clean interlude sound really melodic!

Nice sweeping solo, a bit short but sound very cool!



Home recording
Well i wanted a nice epic intro haha, not all my songs are like that, there is no lyrics to it, as i have no singer for it! Would be intresting to find a singer though and see what they can do to it!

And actually there isn't any sweeps in the solo xD
Its mostly legato stuff with a bit of tapping!

But cheers for the feedback
My Gear

Guitars:
Dean Cadillac

Amp:
Marshall JVM 205H
2x12 Harley Benton Cab w/V30's
#4
Quote by -Ravenous-


And actually there isn't any sweeps in the solo xD
Its mostly legato stuff with a bit of tapping!



Really? Sound to me like sweeps oops xD

If you do more send them to me
#5
Great stuff dude!

Do you have anymore stuff? I'd like to hear!

There is a bit too much repeating of the pedalriff imo, and in the interlude you should slow down the vibrato and make it a bit wider, that'd sound better imo :P

Also, in the fast solo, don't hold a break after every run, that ruins the effect of a fast solo imo. you don't have to make it one big run, but not a pause after every measure either (well maybe not every measure but you know what i mean..)

Great stuff overall dude, keep it up! I'd definitly like to hear more!
#6
Quote by KoenDercksen
Great stuff dude!

Do you have anymore stuff? I'd like to hear!

There is a bit too much repeating of the pedalriff imo, and in the interlude you should slow down the vibrato and make it a bit wider, that'd sound better imo :P

Also, in the fast solo, don't hold a break after every run, that ruins the effect of a fast solo imo. you don't have to make it one big run, but not a pause after every measure either (well maybe not every measure but you know what i mean..)

Great stuff overall dude, keep it up! I'd definitly like to hear more!


Cheers man
Ummm i do have some more stuff, but most of it i need to re-record anyway!
So i'll probably be adding more stuff up here soon enough, so keep an eye out

Which riff do you mean? I think its most 'cus there is no vox to be honest, most songs if you listen without vox, its a liiiiittle boring haha.

And i'll let you in on a secret, thats my first decent fast solo :P, so yeah there is still room for improvement haha

Cheers for the feedback though
My Gear

Guitars:
Dean Cadillac

Amp:
Marshall JVM 205H
2x12 Harley Benton Cab w/V30's