Your playing was great for the outro solo, a few flat bends, but that was it. I thought the notes you added didn't fit the song well though. I think that solo needs to be played the way Kirk wrote it originally. Even live, it doesn't sound as good as the recording.

Also, your lead tone needs fixing, its sometimes shrill and dull.

All in all, your covers are pretty damn good, just minor flaws.
I agree with Romeo, you could make it flow together a bit more aswell. Also, your hands are huge!
That was pretty good. Your playing is a lot neater than mine! You hit a couple wrong notes here and there though.
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