Great song, the only thing that stuck out to me was the bass in the verse. I'm sure it probably sounds better in real life than it does on Gp5 though. I'd consider revising it. I think it kinda wrecks the soft feel, but then again, I haven't heard the vocals. Hope this helps...

edit- congrats on making a non-mainstream pop song!

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