#1
I put it in my profile a while ago, and I figured I should let you all know about it.

If anybody wanted to take a look, that would be super duper.

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#2
The strumming pattern isn't right. But thankfully, when the vocals kicked in, I forgot about that. I quite like your style of singing. But it seems a little low in the energy department. Try singing a bit louder for the choruses. That way there can be some more dynamic, which is what the Foo Fighters are pretty famous for(quiet verses/loud choruses). Basically, just put more of yourself into it. Pretty good other than that.

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#3
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The strumming pattern isn't right. But thankfully, when the vocals kicked in, I forgot about that. I quite like your style of singing. But it seems a little low in the energy department. Try singing a bit louder for the choruses. That way there can be some more dynamic, which is what the Foo Fighters are pretty famous for(quiet verses/loud choruses). Basically, just put more of yourself into it. Pretty good other than that.
I've got to agree with this; I really liked it, and honestly, your voice is great. The lower energy in the chorus is okay for acoustic, but full band, you'll have to step it up a bit. Other than that, loved it.