The instrumentation was good and you have pretty good recording quality. The singer was one thing I didn't like. He seems to have a fairly good range, but he is rather nasal in his singing and it sounds like he's being timid, almost as if he needs to get just a little grit into his singing and sing with his throat. Also... the part around 1:40 where the drums stop and it's only guitar kind of threw me off...it felt like the guitar was a little off time or the rythym was kind of broken up. But the entire collectiveness of the song was fantastic, you guys are doing very very well. Just got to cross your 't's and dot your 'i's and you'll be fine.

The Pit. The Movie.