#1
well this is the first time i have posted lyrics written by me in this forum so i am not really sure how it all works. i am just gonna post it - i dont usually write lyrics normally just the music and vocal melody but this just came to me let me know what you guys think.

oh yes the music is a mix of thrash/punk/death-metal so there are clean vocals and growling involved

~Subterfuge~

do you have something to die for
a purpose for which you live
if not come here and
we'll rid you of sin

for one buck or twenty
we'll tell you the lie
and if you are lucky
maybe even send you to die

do as we say
not as we do
its not about money
but we'll take it from you

Is it the love of the money
is it simply the hate
or is it for power
you manipulate

is there more than meets the eye
or is it simply a lie
those forgotten truths
we initiate

herein's the answer
the truth not the lie
we don't follow it
but you should try

do as we say
not as we do
its not about Hate
it was a sad Mistake

Is it the love of the money
is it simply the hate
or is it for power
you manipulate

bridge:
Peace for all is what we share
love, compassion everywhere
together we will save the world
help us - take them - overthrow

Peace for all is what we share
love, compassion everywhere

Peace for all is what we share
Peace for all

bridge2:
join us or die

join us or die

join us or die

join us or die

i'm not sure i'm right
but i'm not sure i'm wrong
but the truth is out there
it's been all along

do as we say
not as we do
its not about power
but we'll take it from you

Is it the love of the money
is it simply the hate
or is it for power
you manipulate
Grooving to the Music




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#2
do you have something to die for
a purpose for which you live
if not come here and
we'll rid you of sin

the last 2 lines had a flow issue...what i read in my head was different then what you had...I heard.

If not come in here and
we'll rid you of your sin.

it seemed to fit with the first 2 better...just an observation.

We initiate/ also seemed a little out of place.

Overall not bad for a first attempt, nothing eloquent but puts a good message forth.

C4C please. In sig