Comment on anything, song structure, guitar tone, etc. For anyone interested, the guitars were recorded with a Vypyr 75 through an SM-57 plugged into a Lexicon Alpha. Bass was done with Guitar Rig, and drums were programmed with Beatcraft and lots of time.

Oh, the song is called "It's Okay Guys..."
Ibanez RG570 circa 1993
Ibanez S2020XAV
Carvin DC127
EVH 5153 50w
Orange PPC112
I liked it alot. It's got a really cool feel to it. Kept me interested all the way through but wasn't disjointed at all. Loved it. 5 stars
without vocals by the 2 min mark i was getting sick of it. not to say its not good. the guitar playing was great, along with the recording. i did feel though that by that 2 min mark it needed a change realy bad something to take it some place else. it was just that same riffing over and over again. with a little varryation and vocals this could be a great song. the guitar part sounds great, and maybe with vocals it wouldent need a change as bad. that was a good listen though. i'd love to hear it when its done.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1189840