#1
This is the latest song I've been working on. The main riff at the beginning is something I had composed a couple of months back and kind of forgot about because I was stuck on a chorus. Then I found it again last night and a chorus just sprang from my fingers, and so far I've got around half the song done, IMO. Any crit is welcome as well as advice on where to go from here, seeing as I'm feeling a little bit stuck right now on this one.

C4C, so just leave the link
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#2
Well, if it means anything, I like it. Although it`s kinda hard to imagine all of that in one song (could be pretty epic, though). Anyway, I`d suggest you continue either with an instrumental break, or repeat the intro.