#1
I just wrote this about 5 minutes ago, i was playing around with different riffs and thought this one would make a good improv, it pertty much made up of hammer ons and pull off, with some chords and picking to make it interseting.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ethan_hanus/music/all/play690879
#2
i listend to "hammer time" youre a great guitar player. i remember listening to youre stuff before. cool little riff. the tone seems a little shaky or something, just off a little bit, but thats might be what you were going for. that would be a cool riff deal to build a song around. it gets a little old after almost 2 min of basicaly the same thing. i think there needs to be some change ups but yeah, a good riff for a song or just to jam/play lead to. not bad man.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1191206