Very nice. I really digg the mellow intro and then how it picks up towards the end. It very much reminds me of Pink Floyd. Some tripped out vocals might be cool to add to this, but it also works pretty well as an instrumental piece. The only problem I can think of is you misspelled unconscious (not sure if it's intentional or not, but I just wanted to let you know.) Anyway, keep up the good work!

Crit mine if you have a chance: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1187051